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Post by ThornesQuest on Dec 1, 2013 11:57:48 GMT -5
The poster before you gives page and line numbers, and you quote the line that you find there. - Use your current Work in Progress.
- If your WiP is divided into separate documents for each chapter, or whatever, use the current document you're writing in.
- Quote EXACTLY what occurs on that line and only what's on that line, regardless of whether it's a complete sentence, a sentence fragment or several sentences.
- If the page and line numbers are too high (don't exist yet in your WiP), divide the numbers in half as many times as you need to.
- Please keep your quotations PG!
I shall start. Page 3, line 15.
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Post by ThornesQuest on Dec 1, 2013 12:03:00 GMT -5
On page 3, line 15 of chapter 13 of Fire Child, I found: think. No time to … address other pressing matters. Next: Page 1, line 1.
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Post by Misa Buckley on Dec 1, 2013 12:43:11 GMT -5
Page 1, first line of Archangel: Most stories start at the beginning. Born then, raised there. Not that it matters, because we never Next:[/b] page 7, line 11
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Post by ThornesQuest on Dec 1, 2013 14:48:28 GMT -5
Page 7, line 11 of chapter 13 of Fire Child: “Yldenthorne,” he reproved. Next: page 5, line 2
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Post by Rinelle on Dec 2, 2013 0:45:06 GMT -5
Page 5, line 2 of Reckless Recon: the shuttle had landed, and where the engineer her dad had wanted to talk to would Next: page 11, line 20
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Post by ThornesQuest on Dec 2, 2013 10:36:01 GMT -5
My chapters are mostly 10 or fewer pages, so I halved 11 to get 5. So, page 5, line 11 of Chapter 1 of Fire Child: knees were a throbbing mess, and she didn’t doubt that her under-tunic was stained with Next: page 4, line 1.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 2, 2013 10:54:40 GMT -5
page 4, line 1. ' Ghost of a Chance' "Agreed." Page 141, line 12
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Post by ThornesQuest on Dec 2, 2013 11:03:27 GMT -5
Page 141, line 12. My book is divided into chapters, so I had to cut 141 in half a few times. Here's page 8, line 12 of chapter 2: After a moment, Thorne swatted the air in front of her face as if a mosquito were Next: page 23, line 23.
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Post by Misa Buckley on Dec 2, 2013 12:18:18 GMT -5
Page 23, line 23 of Cassiopeia: station glitter; a huge, artificial snowflake that shimmered against the velvet background of
Next: page 5, line 16
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Post by ThornesQuest on Dec 3, 2013 7:06:41 GMT -5
In Chapter 3, page 5, line 16, I found: “Did I – did I – foul it? Was it my wickedness that made it have to be burned?” Next: page 2, line 2
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Post by chrisk on Dec 28, 2013 11:24:32 GMT -5
Ooh, okay! This is a story that I actually just finished the first draft, but anyway:
well enough that he just took Campbell up to the finish line and watched them ride to victory from there.
Next: Page 7, Line 16
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Post by ThornesQuest on Dec 28, 2013 15:33:39 GMT -5
In chapter 4 of Fire Child, page 7, line 16 is a fragment of a piece of dialogue: she releases you from her thrall.” Next: page 8, line 35
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Post by chrisk on Jan 20, 2014 19:51:32 GMT -5
"There are indeed guidelines against releasing that information, beyond the clearance you...
Page 64, line 19. (If you have a WIP that long.)
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Post by Deleted on Jan 20, 2014 22:46:55 GMT -5
Alice slapped Andrea's shoulder and gave her a quick glare.
Chapter 5, page 3, line 10
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Post by elizabethtwist on Aug 4, 2015 14:50:30 GMT -5
It would change things, but that was okay. The environment was screwed; fossil fuels
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